For your food memoir, I thought the presentation was very organized and very clean, and I really enjoyed the theme. With regards to the food, I thought that the situation at the dinner table was very well explained, and the concept of age as well between you and your cousin was rather interesting as a reason for taking the last bite. The food looked delicious, and also the description of the food at the birthday party was great! In the discussion, I believe that your mentioning of the voice of the mermaid was a very relevant point that I also referenced, and it's a very good conclusion on the poem. The way you tied that to TEWWG was also rather impressive, and I thought that it was a very mature way to link the two. Good job!
Hi Divya!
ReplyDeleteFor your food memoir, I thought the presentation was very organized and very clean, and I really enjoyed the theme. With regards to the food, I thought that the situation at the dinner table was very well explained, and the concept of age as well between you and your cousin was rather interesting as a reason for taking the last bite. The food looked delicious, and also the description of the food at the birthday party was great!
In the discussion, I believe that your mentioning of the voice of the mermaid was a very relevant point that I also referenced, and it's a very good conclusion on the poem. The way you tied that to TEWWG was also rather impressive, and I thought that it was a very mature way to link the two. Good job!